The Pit x Palutena Story

Chapter 1 - The Gravidity Of Viridi
Submitted: June 11, 2019 • Updated: September 9, 2019
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Chapter 2 - Lady Palutena, This Is Definitely Not Okay!
Submitted: September 9, 2019 • Updated: September 9, 2019
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Chapter 3 - The Temptation Of A Pure Soul
Submitted: October 30, 2019 • Updated: October 30, 2019
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Chapter 4 - The Purest, Most Primal Form Of Sex
Submitted: December 10, 2019 • Updated: December 10, 2019
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Chapter 5 - A Naughty Intermission, And Ground Rules
Submitted: March 21, 2020 • Updated: March 21, 2020
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Xilokiir on December 19, 2019, 5:01:53 AM

Xilokiir on December 19, 2019, 5:01:53 AM (Chapter: index)

Aw man, I was really excited with where this might go. I can't enjoy femdom though so, meh. It is well written though, so congratulations on your good work.

blah1139 on February 17, 2020, 5:52:29 PM

blah1139 on February 17, 2020, 5:52:29 PM (Chapter: index)

This actually isn't going in a femdom direction. It'll be a slow burn but it'll eventually get around to Pit taking charge. There's currently 4 more chapters waiting for release, and at least a few more waiting to be written. 

Xilokiir on February 18, 2020, 5:36:08 PM

Xilokiir on February 18, 2020, 5:36:08 PM (Chapter: index)

That sounds good. Unfortunately future assertiveness on the part of the MC doesn't really help my wilted bone now though... and I am not certain any level of assertiveness can make up for his lack of spine here. I really feel hypocritical now that I think about it. Complaining about how it wasn't arousing whilst secretly I wanted him to tell Palutena that she could go fuck herself. While that would be admittedly fun to read, it wouldn't exactly be arousing, so why am I complaining now? I don't even know. Forget I said anything, I obviously don't know what I'm talking about.

Arachnorocker on January 18, 2020, 1:18:33 AM

Arachnorocker on January 18, 2020, 1:18:33 AM (Chapter: index)

Love the story, can’t wait for the next chapter.

Frocto on January 18, 2020, 3:53:30 AM

Frocto on January 18, 2020, 3:53:30 AM (Chapter: index)

Well, you shouldn't have too long to wait, it'll be along soon.

TheNewEros on December 11, 2019, 1:50:32 AM

TheNewEros on December 11, 2019, 1:50:32 AM (Chapter: index)

I was trying to think about who Viridi could even have sex with to get pregnant in the first place, but the only ones I could think of were Arlon and Magnus. Arlon's dead, and Magnus is a human, so they were both out.

Then I remembered that Viridi kinda took Dark Pit at the end of the game.

Frocto on December 11, 2019, 1:59:23 AM

Frocto on December 11, 2019, 1:59:23 AM (Chapter: index)

Wow, doin my boy Thanatos dirty like that!
Anyway, yes, it was originally a coin flip between Magnus and Dark Pit, but after talking it over with the commissioner we decided to go with Dark Pit. He should even be cropping up in a future chapter at some point!

Cush on July 14, 2019, 5:49:24 AM

Cush on July 14, 2019, 5:49:24 AM (Chapter: index)

I can't wait for this story to get going. It looks very promising!!! 

Procrastimate on June 16, 2019, 7:12:57 AM

Procrastimate on June 16, 2019, 7:12:57 AM (Chapter: index)

This was so erotic and tempting. I love Palutena's attitude, please keep this going.

Frocto on June 16, 2019, 10:38:19 AM

Frocto on June 16, 2019, 10:38:19 AM (Chapter: index)

Thanks for the kind words! Updates might be a little show on this one since I'm eager to tie off ongoing stories as well, but I'll definitely be getting to it once those are done.