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Total Immersion

Ashton Wilkins is a pretty ordinary guy - albeit pretty unlucky. His luck seems to change as he is invited to take part in the closed Beta of the greatest virtual reality game of his lifetime!

Contains tg, impregnation, bestiality, oral, body swap, orcs, and lots of cum. 

Latest 4 chapters features renders of scenes!



Chapter 1 - Money, apparently, is everything
Submitted: January 18, 2016 • Updated: April 10, 2016
Word count: 4609 • Size: 24k • Comments: 0 • views: 17751

Chapter 2 - Completely skipping the frying pan
Submitted: January 23, 2016 • Updated: January 23, 2016
Word count: 4882 • Size: 25k • Comments: 0 • views: 13441

Chapter 3 - A matter of perspective
Submitted: March 25, 2016 • Updated: March 25, 2016
Word count: 4666 • Size: 25k • Comments: 0 • views: 11954

Chapter 4 - Fleshlights have feelings too!
Submitted: July 1, 2016 • Updated: July 1, 2016
Word count: 4385 • Size: 24k • Comments: 0 • views: 11222

Chapter 5 - Woof and tickle
Submitted: October 23, 2016 • Updated: October 23, 2016
Word count: 4630 • Size: 25k • Comments: 0 • views: 12692

Chapter 6 - Don't trust doctors
Submitted: December 31, 2016 • Updated: December 31, 2016
Word count: 4934 • Size: 26k • Comments: 0 • views: 15763

Chapter 7 - What's in a name?
Submitted: January 12, 2017 • Updated: January 12, 2017
Word count: 4479 • Size: 24k • Comments: 0 • views: 17949

Chapter 8 - A load of bull
Submitted: May 8, 2017 • Updated: May 8, 2017
Word count: 4545 • Size: 25k • Comments: 0 • views: 15628

Chapter 9 - Outpatients, or, Out of patience
Submitted: August 14, 2017 • Updated: August 14, 2017
Word count: 4708 • Size: 26k • Comments: 0 • views: 16102


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UZ9 on May 2, 2018, 10:08:15 AM

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UZ9Loved it!

Possible to get the renders without the white background uploaded to your account here and even the renders from the other stories?

JoeForest on May 2, 2018, 10:54:28 AM

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JoeForestWell, I usually render them as .png's (without the white background), but the site I host the images on converts them to a .jpg - a little annoying, I know! I might upload a zip to MEGA or something with all of them collected together...

UZ9 on May 2, 2018, 2:53:01 PM

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UZ9Awesome, I'll be keeping an eye out, you definitely do quality work.

kilandor on January 28, 2018, 2:32:18 PM

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kilandorJust finished reading through this story and it is awesome!  I love the kinda dark ending and your renders are superb!

Is there any chance you revise the first 5 chapters with renders as well?  You do a great job with them and I think they really add a lot to your stories.

Thanks for writing this and looking forward to anything new you do!

yetanothersmutwriter on September 30, 2017, 11:22:25 PM

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yetanothersmutwriterIs there any way you could post versions without the renders? They really aren't my cup of tea at all, and they drastically mess up my reading flow. I understand why you implemented the renders, but I would very much prefer versions without them.

mikerpen on October 27, 2017, 2:45:05 PM

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I on the other hand absolutely love your renders.  They put the stories over the top.  I am sure they take some time to create, but in addition to your actual story, they are why I come back most everyday hoping for an update to one of your stories.  Come on Cumdump Conversion Console!

JoeForest on October 1, 2017, 2:47:40 AM

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JoeForestHey there - first off, I'm glad you like the story! To answer your question, I won't be posting a version sans renders on HentaiFoundry. BUT! I have also posted all of my stories on , without renders! So if you follow that link to my profile, you'll be able to find them all in a hopefully more readable state.

exarch411 on September 4, 2017, 1:46:28 PM

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exarch411wish Total Immersion had been longer but fuck that was good. Cheers

7652098657023 on August 20, 2017, 7:57:18 AM

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7652098657023Really said this story ended so soon, honestly the last part felt kinda rushed (Ashton suddenly adopting dog mannerisms - which we got told he did, but didn't really witness progression/corruption ourselves and a few other examples). My biggest kink is corruption and your story provided, thank you.
While I really like that the body and mind modifications stayed in real world I also liked the game world and am half tempted to want Ashton to be stuck there forever. Too bad Ashton didn't get additional breasts or at least nipples to feed his/her children and that we and he/she didn't get to witness them being born. And after he was brought back maybe more close calls with the subjects of his kink/sexual programming and more combat and combat defeats/his perks kicking in instead of captivity-only during game would've been great.
Renders were exquisite quality, Ashton and the other girls were hot as hell!
Do you plan to resume Someone else's shoes? Will you be continuing your text games (SLUT academy, Totally immersed) as well? SLUT academy was supposed to have been updated months ago according to your comments. There were also some oversights or things not yet implemented, like removing anal plug and being seen doing it not having any consequences. In future updates more punishments in body/mind modifications would be great, with possible... souvenir from the K10 demo... ;-)

JoeForest on August 20, 2017, 1:08:04 PM

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JoeForestFair commentary on the ending, although I don't think I could have finished it in any reasonable time scale if I didn't do so now. Of course, there is a possibility of future spin-offs, but I'll be focusing on other projects for the time being - such as S.L.U.T. Academy! The most recent update was a small one in April, but I am definitely still working on it, don't worry about that!

7652098657023 on August 21, 2017, 2:52:19 AM

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7652098657023That's good news, thanks!

I understand what you mean with not sure of finishing it, sometimes stories just run away from us or we create a world that turns out that we chewed off more than we could swallow, cause there are so many possibilities where to take it and how far.

Small spin-offs and especially alternate endings would be nice - they wouldn't interfere with the story canon as set now, they can be posted on their own schedule and with their own direction without pressure of updating an unfinished story and they give the opportunity to explore the what-if. The world of Total Immersion was very interesting and I immensely enjoyed Totally Immersed, with mythical creatures, interesting guilds, carnal stuff, combat and so on, almost to the point where I wish it was real and I could be invited as beta tester instead of Ashton. xD

Looking forward to more from you!

nihao2u on August 19, 2017, 3:58:09 AM

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nihao2uI felt the ending was a bit cliche: I think having Ashton make it out free but stuck with compulsions that twisted her sex life would be just as twisted and more satisfying (in the sense of the villains getting their comeuppance). Anyhow it's a great story overall and the renders have improved greatly over time imo.

JoeForest on August 20, 2017, 1:05:22 PM

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JoeForestI would say that's pretty fair. By no means did I start this story with a plan, but I hope to be able to finish off my other stories in a better manner!

mikerpen on August 16, 2017, 11:33:59 AM

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mikerpenA great story.  Liked the ebb and flow where Ashton looked like he was going to escape and then gets sucked back in with further changes.  The ending was erotic and dark and I love dark endings.  And as always with your stories, the drawings added so much to the story.

JoeForest on August 20, 2017, 1:03:59 PM

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JoeForestThank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it all!

Itachi1275 on August 15, 2017, 6:46:39 AM

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Itachi1275I wasn't expecting the end to come so soon. While I wish there was more, what you have here is pretty damn good.

JoeForest on August 16, 2017, 11:04:15 AM

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JoeForestHonestly, I'm not sure I was expecting it to be done so soon either, but I'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless.

DetectiveSmut on August 15, 2017, 12:15:23 AM

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DetectiveSmutIt's sad to see such a great story come to an end! Loved it from start to finish!

JoeForest on August 16, 2017, 11:03:17 AM

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JoeForestYeah, it is a bit, but honestly I'm glad to have finished it. Thank you very much, and I hope you enjoy my other stories!

DarthKakuzu on August 14, 2017, 3:22:33 PM

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DarthKakuzuReally enjoyed this story. The ending seemed really sudden. 

JoeForest on August 16, 2017, 10:50:40 AM

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JoeForestThat's fair, I do admit it was fairly quick - but it was either that or 6 more months with no motivation to work on it at all... still, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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