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Commission for (and in collaboration with) Rainy.

Is the growing population of girls born with the Futa mutation treating traditional girls (aka sleeves) with enough respect? 33% of the women polled said yes. The other 67% were not available for comment due to extreme cum bloating or mouth stretching or constant moaning. This poll is sponsored by PlasmaCorp. PlasmaCorp - We are the future and so are you.



Chapter 0 - Content Warnings (spoilers)
Submitted: May 31, 2019 • Updated: August 3, 2019
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Chapter 1 - A trick up her sleeve
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Chapter 2 - Out of the blue
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Chapter 3 - More art than science
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Chapter 4 - Facing the music
Submitted: August 2, 2019 • Updated: August 3, 2019
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Ticker on July 12, 2019, 3:22:48 PM

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TickerWhere the building lobby was glossy and uniform, this lobby’s walls were covered in framed, original, turn of the century Sparrows and Cicadas.

I can not WAIT for a time when Sparrow and Cicada works are considered high brow art!

Krombomich on July 12, 2019, 3:27:46 PM

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KrombomichBe the change you want to see in the world! It would be a great ice-breaker in your living room.

Gecko123 on October 23, 2019, 11:58:44 AM

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Gecko123I dare you really I do 

ObservantWolf on August 5, 2019, 2:16:38 PM

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ObservantWolfSo, just read chapter 4... your story concepts are still fun (in a horrific kind of way), I am curious to see where this goes next (and I liked the twist you introduced here). But it kind of feels rushed. There were times when I had to stop and think to really grasp what was going on, and points where it felt like a sentence or paragraph was missing. Your descriptions have all been very vivid up to this point, so I'm wondering what's going on with this one. 

YesWeCan on July 19, 2019, 1:21:56 AM

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YesWeCanWow, I don't usually comment on stories, but that was incredibly messed up.
Can't wait to see more.

Krombomich on July 20, 2019, 12:41:10 PM

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KrombomichNice, thanks! Poppin' a comment cherry.

ObservantWolf on July 15, 2019, 9:11:57 AM

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ObservantWolfWow, ok you said it was getting darker, you certainly delivered. Still really enjoying it (I'm a sucker for tech wank and bio mods), even though you're definitely approaching "no woman's land", aka misogynist hell futa style territory. 
Looking at the world building, you still haven't really covered why the approximately 5/6th of the population put up with this. You made it clear that they aren't happy with it, but not why they go along anyway. I remember how the families get paid for their daughters, but I didn't get the impression that the general population was in such dire straights that they should be willing to sell family members into intense slavery for a better lot in life. Thoughts?

Krombomich on July 16, 2019, 12:44:01 PM

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KrombomichI doubt the history of the rise of the planet of the futa will be further explained unless there is another flashback chapter. I didn't think it would be such a hot topic (I'm flattered you guys are taking it so seriously). It never felt that far fetched to me. Here's how I break down the transition, which happens over several generation:
1. Futa are few and outcast.
2. Futa fight for equal rights. Their numbers grow.
3. Futa sperm and milk are discovered to be so potent that they completely take over the power industry and food industry.
4. Because they used to be persecuted, futa join together as one entity that controls the entire world economy and money also buys you politicians.
5. Futa refuse to be slaves, so in order to continue to supply the world with infinite power and food, they demand sleeves
6. Volunteers are paid to work part-time as sleeves (spend a weekend getting fucked and you'll get money and feed+power an entire African village)
7. Sleeve is pretty much the only job you can expect to get as young woman.
8. Recruitment programs in schools... buy the schools.
9. Pay parents instead of sleeves. Make it hard to get enough money to get by. 
10. Slowly shift public opinion on sleeving: it's unavoidable, it's for the greater good and it's how you get real money.

ObservantWolf on July 19, 2019, 11:22:40 AM

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ObservantWolfHuh, the ease them into it approach. Combined with some social engineering and a good propaganda team... Yeah, I could see that working. Huh, and there is some engineered financial hardship, we just haven't seen it due to our Futa perspective? Yeah, it could get there, although I don't know if it would be a stable situation. The best oppressors hide their problematic behavior from the general population, those public 'sleeve' stands would generate lots of discontent, particularly if they aren't tended to properly anymore.

OK, something I am curious about, wanted to ask. If you're going to answer this question in future chapters I'm happy to wait till they come out, but if not... These new Sleeves, the modified ones like Blue and the wheelbarrow trio from chapter 3, how are they made? Are we talking vat grown from egg to distribution, vat grown until birth then fostered out, vat grown then raised in house, modified egg implanted in a surrogate, or regular girl surgically modified? A) I'm always curious about the details and B) the answer would effect how the general public responds to the emergency of these new sleeves.

SpectralTime on June 18, 2019, 1:07:12 AM

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SpectralTimeSo, the previous chapter kind of underplayed the inherent darkness of the premise with a light tone and over-the-top absurdity.  But this chapter kind of throws into stark relief just how fucked up this world is, especially Olivia's sense of entitlement in that one key scene, coupled with the fact that we know she's a cruel and neglectful "owner," coupled with the fact that she's apparently a weirdo outlier in thinking of her slaves as people... 

I mean, I dunno if this was intentional, but even the comment under this paints a picture of a world much less dark than that last chapter was.

Braidborn on June 18, 2019, 7:49:32 AM

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BraidbornAbsolute power corrupts absolutely,   it sounds like,   the power the futa's have basically enabled them to rule the world,   with little to no resistance,  they can and will do whatever they want,    while I will agree that the latest chapter is significantly darker,    it should not be unexpected,   Plasmacorp sounds like your bog standard Mega corporation,      debt bondage almost always plays a role,     (i.e. I owe you more money than I can pay,   I become your slave and work for you until the debt is paid)         

ObservantWolf on June 20, 2019, 8:23:59 AM

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In some ways it almost seems like it's more the Corp in power, style, with the Futa's just along for the ride, enjoying their station as upper class citizens. Not that that excuses their behavior, mind. Note how Plasma corp. owns the schools and probably wrote that legislation they reference. If they literally control all energy production and a massive share of food distribution then they are probably making money hand over fist, even if they compensate the Futa quite well. They weren't really clear on the whole selling their daughters part as it relates to the idea of debt bondage. The way the girls would prefer not to get taken kind of implies that while life isn't great, their families are well off enough that basic necessities aren't a major problem. Like, if you don't know if your next meal is coming, or surviving preventable illness is not guaranteed, or Housing is ether a slum or transient then the chance to live in a warm, and clean environment where you'll never go hungry would be considered a fair trade by some and not universally feared, even if you are relegated to being a living sex toy and cum receptacle. I suspect that the families depicted here are stable working or middle class but the social status of women has been so degraded that the families see it as acceptable to trade their children for the chance to be catapulted into the upper middle class or lower rich bracket. Plus if the corp is essentially running things and their power base requires a steady supply of healthy young women it would make to insure a large, healthy, and content breeding population to maintain supply and continue buying product. 

As to comments. Yeah, it is a very dark world, no denying that. Women as property, families going along with it, corporate control...  Dark seems to be Krombomich's specialty... I guess I can call it fun because Dark is kind of a baseline for me when it comes to erotica. 

Braidborn on June 20, 2019, 8:38:24 AM

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BraidbornWell,   I think you are forgetting something,    you say,    "Note how Plasma corp. owns the schools and probably wrote that legislation they reference. If they literally control all energy production and a massive share of food distribution then they are probably making money hand over fist, even if they compensate the Futa quite well"          I am fairly certain that the Futa own and operate the company,      It just makes sense,       "Instead, they seized the means of production and most ‘worked’ from home"     This sentence implies that the futa themselves own Plasmacorp,     the futa were the ones who wrote the laws,  

Krombomich on June 20, 2019, 10:58:16 AM

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KrombomichYou may both be right at different times in history.  I see more like the rise of communism in Russia (or my understanding of it from reading Animal Farm in high school). Futa as a people fought for equality and justice and ended up toppling the patriarchy (in a political and economic sense) and ended up with an unhealthy amount of influence. Then, from the vacuum of power they created by reshaping the world's economy, something much, much worse rose up. Emily's generation knows nothing but opulence so they don't give a shit but they might be pawns just like everyone else for the greater good. The greater good.

Gecko123 on July 5, 2019, 5:56:14 AM

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Gecko123 I would like to question how they manage to outside most of the veterans on the planet they have been shot to shreds normally I don’t reach care about this kind of crap but that’s a ridiculous statement 

ObservantWolf on June 20, 2019, 9:09:41 AM

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ObservantWolfMaybe. But take a look at this line from chapter 1.

"The truth was: her mutation was permanent. PlasmaCorp’s vision of the future left no room for compromise or warning labels. They knew futas would embrace these enhancements once they felt them in action; no point in letting them second guess themselves. "

The company has no problem treating Futa's as unwitting test subjects, making permanent biological changes without full knowledge and consent. Now maybe someone in R&D is a sociopath, or it could be corps just being corps... But I see it as more likely that the corp is in charge, but they use social manipulation to make the general public think the Futas are on top. Maybe there are some Futas in PlasmaCorp, but I don't think it would behave that way if it was a tool of the Futas to run the country/world.

Krombomich on June 20, 2019, 11:11:20 AM

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KrombomichIt will get darker I'm afraid. I will make sure to tag things appropriately in the Content Warnings for future chapters. Basically, the present sucks but the future that PlasmaCorp wants to bring about is suckier and we will see more hints and examples of that soon.

ObservantWolf on June 6, 2019, 3:41:09 AM

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ObservantWolfFun story, definitely curious where you're going next with it (did Olivia double dose herself with the enhancer drug?). There is one thing that made me wonder: given how you described futa cum it seems like any girl they fuck regularly would rapidly be rendered sterile, or at least certainly be unable to produce offspring with the futa. Are there woman specifically set aside for men so they can be bred to create the next generation? Or are people just grown in vats these days? ( just my thoughts on world building...)

Krombomich on June 6, 2019, 9:26:51 PM

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KrombomichThe sleeve selection process is an interesting topic that indeed deserves to be fleshed out soon. The way I see things now:
Futa sperm doesnt have long-term effects on sterility (but I can see why you say that)
Futa mutation affects X% of female births and there is still a world of men and normal women having babies out there.
There is a contract system for sleeves, perhaps to get out of your student loans or just as a job in this futa-centric economy (TBD)

ObservantWolf on June 20, 2019, 8:30:22 AM

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ObservantWolfWait, I thought Futa were sterile in this world. How does Olivia have a futa mom? 

Krombomich on June 20, 2019, 8:47:31 AM

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KrombomichI hope I didn't mess this up but I think it makes sense: Futa can't impregnant girls but they have a functional female reproductive system. And you know what happens when a mommy and a daddy love each other very much.

ObservantWolf on June 20, 2019, 8:55:43 AM

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ObservantWolfOh, duh, yeah, you mentioned that in chapter 1... A Futa could become a mom, they would just have to get vaginally fucked by a baseline male. You've put enough detail into this sucker for all kinds of fun theorizing about social structures and norms. 👍

Krombomich on June 20, 2019, 11:58:26 AM

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KrombomichI see that! I'm thrilled you guys find the world intriguing. Rainy and I bounce a lot of ideas around and things were kept vague at the beginning not to lock ourselves on a path. I already had to go back to chapter one to change a minor detail that contradicted the way I wanted Selection Day to go down (I'll never tell). Anyway, thanks for keeping me on my toes. I hope not to disappoint in the future. Also see my reply to Braidborn for some lore clarification.

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