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RWBY: The Surrogate

[RWBY] Yang comes to Jaune with an offer: get her wife, Blake Belladonna, pregnant. Little did the three of them know that a night together would alter their entire relationship.

My first non-Hunter of Huntresses (//maximum-context.ru/xbnat/stories/user/SAZEREX/31622/RWBY-Hunter-of-Huntresses) RWBY smut. One-shot.

Breeding, Slight Cuckquean, Voyeurism, Insemination, Impregnation.

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Chapter 0 - RWBY: The Surrogate
Submitted: April 14, 2019 • Updated: April 14, 2019
Word count: 9177 • Size: 51k • Comments: 25 • views: 22263

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jackwhite on May 6, 2019, 2:24:29 AM

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jackwhiteWhile the sex part was OK I hate to say there was a few things in this that really bothered me, the first being this. I don’t think I’ve ever had a full conversation with Blake. I'm sorry but are you trying to tell me in the literal years they've known each other they've never had one, not one conversation with each other, I mean I know there not that close in the show itself but come on all those years and not one conversation between the two are you kidding me. 

The next part I didn't really like is pretty much everything between when Blake said what is Jaune doing in our apartment to when they started getting naked, could Blake come off as anymore as a bitch to Jaune here, I mean she literally seems both disgusted and appalled at the mere thought of having sex with Jaune, everything she does and that comes out of her mouth is pretty much her saying how much she doesn't want Jaune there, Sun sure, Jaune hell no, heck I'm surprised Jaune didn't feel offended or even upset with Blake with her attitude toward him, heck the only reason she finally agreed was only because Yang convinced her.

So when you put these two things together it really makes the whole love confession feel forced and like it comes out of nowhere, heck forget being in love they hardly even seem like friends. 

And I'm really sorry if this comes off as mean and that this rant is so long, also I really hope I didn't upset you with this, like I said I found the sex part fine, I just found it really difficult to get into this, when the two of the people having sex and saying they love each other hardly even seem like they like each other. 

SAZEREX on May 6, 2019, 11:17:32 PM

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SAZEREXIt's porn logic, but big dicks break horny chicks. Pound them good enough to make them fall in love with you and your thick cock. Otherwise yeah, I get what you mean about the premise being forced.

Stayininthecloset on April 29, 2019, 4:13:07 PM

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StayinintheclosetSo, this would make one of your side projects down, right?
I wonder whats next on that list

SAZEREX on April 30, 2019, 1:19:03 PM

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SAZEREXCheck my Tumblr post out, then.

Stayininthecloset on April 30, 2019, 1:22:16 PM

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StayinintheclosetYes, i saw that, but you don’t seem to be going in any order that i’m familiar with
Unless that naruto fic was your “all become mature milfs” in which case, we can assume you’re starting from there
But i don’t want to assume, so... of course if you feel the need to keep it a surprise, that is also fine

SAZEREX on April 30, 2019, 3:53:52 PM

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SAZEREXThere's no real order I'm following. Just expect stories such as those popping up in the future.

Straximo on April 24, 2019, 8:57:40 PM

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StraximoThat was fucking hot. Always like Hunter of Huntresses, but like you said in the other comments a one-shot has the benefits of being self contained so you can pull off a tone you might not otherwise able. Your descriptions of body types and erotic power dynamics are fantastic, as per usual.

SAZEREX on April 25, 2019, 1:33:58 AM

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SAZEREXThanks for reading!

Niuhma on April 15, 2019, 8:17:36 AM

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NiuhmaDamn dude, I get busy for a few weeks and suddenly you're writing different stories that are all just as awesome. This was hot as fuck. Keep up the good shit dude.

SAZEREX on April 15, 2019, 2:18:54 PM

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SAZEREXEy thanks man!

SagetheEroHaremKami1998 on April 14, 2019, 1:51:47 AM

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SagetheEroHaremKami1998That was so hot and very well done my friend. I can't wait to see more like this!

SAZEREX on April 14, 2019, 2:32:17 AM

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SAZEREXThanks for reading! I'm planning to make one-shots while at the same time continuing my main series, so look forward to my future work.

SagetheEroHaremKami1998 on April 14, 2019, 2:54:38 AM

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SagetheEroHaremKami1998Oh, I will trust me . Although I do have a question for you if you're willing to answer it.

SAZEREX on April 14, 2019, 1:47:30 PM

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SAZEREXYe?

SagetheEroHaremKami1998 on April 14, 2019, 2:25:15 PM

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SagetheEroHaremKami1998I wanna make a story where my OC gains a harem of RWBY women because of his twin hyper cocks he's had since birth. How would I go about writing it?

SAZEREX on April 14, 2019, 3:54:18 PM

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SAZEREXJust write it lmao. Stream of consciousness always works for me. At the same time, I recommend you to read novels to improve grammar and sentence fluency as well. Constant reading + writing is key. As for plot, that's all up to you. This site exists for us to vomit out our ideas, after all. If you want a key plot or smth then go ahead, but its alright to write unadulterated smut as well. If you're going for plot, I suggest you list down you ideas first before writing.

SagetheEroHaremKami1998 on April 14, 2019, 4:05:46 PM

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SagetheEroHaremKami1998Ok, thank you.

CelestialTroy on April 14, 2019, 3:01:34 PM

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CelestialTroyDo you plan to do a second chapter where Jaune is approached by Ruby and Weiss instead?

SAZEREX on April 14, 2019, 3:55:39 PM

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SAZEREXNah. This is supposed to be a one-shot. However, I have two planned smutfics which will involve Ruby and Weiss respectively. Once I get the next HoH chapter out, I'll start working on them.

SpectralTime on April 14, 2019, 6:37:35 AM

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SpectralTimeThe bits where they suddenly fell in love mid-coitus were a bit much, but I did enjoy the overall story and the characters' attitude a good deal more than your other big story, so I'll just say thanks.  's good, and sexy.

SAZEREX on April 14, 2019, 1:47:15 PM

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SAZEREXHaha, I decided to add the love part for no fucking reason tbh. The perks of making a one-shot is that you get to wrap the whole thing up in one go, and you don't need to set shit up for another chapter. Anyways, thanks for reading!

SpectralTime on April 14, 2019, 2:47:17 PM

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SpectralTimeI mean, it ended with everyone happy and together, so 's not like it was a bad thing.  People're weird, and I can assume there was more chemistry off-page between them.  Thanks for writing!

SAZEREX on April 14, 2019, 3:51:49 PM

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SAZEREXNo problemo~

ManuMetalMaster on April 14, 2019, 7:53:51 AM

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ManuMetalMaster“How do I know that you two won’t come to collect child support from me?"

Welp, turns out they did and they managed to squeeze a pair of rings out of the poor boy too! These kind of things are why one can't trust females smh /s

Anyways, came for the smut, stayed for the fuzzy feels. Hot, sweet and wholesome is the name of the game in this oneshot and I dig it. It's nice to see you can write a down-to-earth and inexperienced Jaune just as well as the alpha stud Jaune from Hunter of Huntresses. Also, "her Bellabooty had evolved into a Belladonkadonk" might be the greatest sentence you ever written lol.

Keep up the amazing work!

SAZEREX on April 14, 2019, 1:48:02 PM

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SAZEREXBELLADONKADONK KEK

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