RWBY: Jauned Anthology

Totally honest, it was hard for me to read Chapter 2. Mostly because it seemed like a departure from Chapter 1, and partly because it was almost a 1:1 to the translation of the aforementioned hentai.

And honestly? I think your own writing is better, by a pretty not-small margin.

Tbh, I treat this as a way to practice my writing. Like, how to translate visuals (e.g. my imagination) into written text. Watching a scene of someone getting pounded is easy, but describing it in the fullest way possible is trickier.

Then again, I did say I was gonna copy NTR plots because of a meme I made. You do you, thanks for the feedback, and look forward to my forthcoming original works.

I didn't mean any offense, I just.... well this is gonna sound offensive no matter how I say it- but I actually don't actively follow you on here or other platforms. I've read your stories and I like them, but I can count on one hand the number of people I actually follow on here. Mostly because up until recently I didn't bother with the follow function or using my account beyond being able to see all the posted stories.

So yeah, my comment came from the perspective of a guy who wasn't in the loop on the meme or forward notice. And frankly, your original writing is a lot better than the hentai. Coming from a man who's read far too much of it in his free time. Memes are memes though, I just wasn't in on the joke. Again, no offense intended.

Aaaaand now I see it's in the description outright, and that the first one is apparently a lifted plot too. So that just goes to being a difference of quality in the hentai themselves I guess, because volume 1 was a lot better than 2 in my opinion- and I'm not even into the whole "guy watches/finds out" thing.

Soooooo ignore me while I go dig my head out of my ass and remind myself not to respond or comment at 4am.

It's a hentai doujin by Mizuryu Kei. One of his first few works Limit Break

You're alive! And I'm glad to hear the next Hunter of Huntresses is 75% complete. Great shit as always dude.

Haha, thanks! Don't go killing me off again though XD

Loved this chapter especially when you added the extra threesome.

As for porn plot I am guessing this is limit break by Mizuryu Kei

Correct! Now you get to choose which title I’ll focus on next: Faunus Whores or Faunus Studs?

Ok!

Wrong, but nice try. User reaperfrost8 got it correct.

It took me a while to find the manga of that name though seeing how old it was I am surprised that I remembered it.
As for the choice of title, I guess I'll pick Faunus Studs

Wrong, but nice try. User reaperfrost8 got it correct.

Another good work, keep it up

Thanks man!