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Hung Padawan

Asha, a Twi'lek Jedi knight, manages to survive the attempted purge of Order 66. Now, she and a young masterless padawan named Del Xedic must escape from Coruscant and find safe passage to the Outer Rim territories. But will she and Del get along as they're forced to hide their true Jedi status, and travel as master and slave?



Chapter 1 - Escape From Coruscant
Submitted: July 28, 2019 • Updated: July 28, 2019
Word count: 48 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 9728

Chapter 2 - Padawan Learner
Submitted: November 19, 2019 • Updated: November 19, 2019
Word count: 48 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 3465


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Usch on December 9, 2019, 7:31:04 AM

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UschI actually laughed out loud at the force ghost part, great update!

Marvyn on August 26, 2019, 12:23:28 PM

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Marvyni liked, hung shotas but consensual are really good for me

HotRettas on August 25, 2019, 9:09:38 PM

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HotRettasI just need more of this.... i love it. Awesome work.

Procrastimate on August 7, 2019, 5:17:18 PM

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Procrastimate[font=sans-serif]Phenomenal, your shota work is one of my favorites. That setup was long but worth the payoff, and that was a steamy sex scene (always love female on shota rimjobs). I do hope for a continuation now that they're relationship dynamic is established and we can see them openly entertain they're mommy/shota romance in wonderfully nasty worshipping sex.[/font]

CraggleJack on July 30, 2019, 7:18:53 PM

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I really like the way this is going so far, nice to see a female that isnt mindless in these kinds of fics.

Grayve on July 28, 2019, 8:13:26 PM

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GrayveEpic read so far! Loved her thought process and her body. Huge fan of twileks and glad she isn’t just a mindless husk of a slut, that makes the read so good! Desperate for more!

Krackers on July 28, 2019, 1:08:11 PM

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Krackersdefinitely hoping this'l continue but also that asha doesn't become a literal slave to del. As in del doesn't get super jedi mind powers and dominates asha, i reckon it would be awesome if asha was still in control but chooses to surrender that control in order to receive and give greater pleasures. Like sorta becoming sith-y but not falling to the dark side. She chooses to relinquish her role as the trainer of del when she's feeling frisky and proceeds to let del have his way with her, letting her experience things she had loooooong denied herself and finding new and erotic ways to enhance her experiences. 
I'm thinking of the sith code from KotOR; Peace is a lie, there is only passion. Through passion I gain strength. Through strength i gain power. Through power i gain victory. Through victory my chains are broken. Let her plumb the depths of her desires and discover the deeper pleasures that await her with del as her lover but don't let her just become some busty fuck slave to a hung, over zealous padawan. Hell, eventually have her train del into coercing other women and creating a space harem that she can also enjoy

SlutWriter on July 28, 2019, 3:06:06 PM

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SlutWriterThe entire story isn't set in stone yet but I don't think it's the right sort of tone to have her becomes a mindless slave; it wouldn't fit with the buildup that we have going. So if and when it's continued Asha will have more agency than that.

Krackers on July 28, 2019, 5:37:39 PM

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Krackersnoice :3

PlagueDoctor1454 on July 28, 2019, 9:41:01 AM

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PlagueDoctor1454Beautiful....don't know what to say other than that. Don't know if the commissioner is the same person behind the Tifa stroke fic, or if this is someone else, but never have your stories made me feel both incredibly rock hard and warm and fuzzy at the same time. Twas both glorious and satisfying, felt as if the two ran in sync with one another. Not to say your stories can't be both or that it only leaves one feeling, but that these stories were told in a way that felt both rewarding and arousing as you read along. As if everything you hoped would happen amongst all the debaucheries and fuckery happened, and in a way that leaves you satisfied on all fronts. Maybe that's just me, but theses stories, especially this one, has left me feeling both wonderful and euphoric as I choke the metaphorical chicken. I don't know how else to tell you well done, other then you are fucking wonderful. As always, your cliffhangers leave me wanting to know what happens next. Hope part 2 of this comes soon, I'd like to know where Asha and Del's relationship is heading, as well as what other positions these two will explore together. Really, just well done man.

SlutWriter on July 28, 2019, 3:04:37 PM

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SlutWriterThanks for the thoughtful comment, Doc. I'm glad you liked the stories. Not sure if commissioner wants a Part 2 of this but I have some ideas if so.

KingEdgar on July 28, 2019, 11:12:31 AM

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KingEdgarI want to play kotor now thanks

SlutWriter on July 28, 2019, 3:03:44 PM

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SlutWriterHa! Same.

JCrowned4 on July 28, 2019, 9:03:19 AM

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JCrowned4Pls continue this series.

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