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The Spider's Toy

This is a commission based on my original universe of . 

Felicia tries to steal a powerful artifact guarded by a giant sentient spider. It's not her first heist, but if she's not careful it might be her last. Awakened, the creature has very specific plans for her...




Chapter 1 - Caught in the spider's web
Submitted: November 2, 2019 • Updated: November 2, 2019
Word count: 2227 • Size: 12k • Comments: 0 • views: 981

Chapter 2 - Alternative version - Willing submission
Submitted: November 9, 2019 • Updated: November 9, 2019
Word count: 2309 • Size: 13k • Comments: 0 • views: 462


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GrandPaBrowning on November 25, 2019, 4:51:56 PM

GrandPaBrowning on (Chapter: index)
GrandPaBrowningGood short story. And the alternative variant makes it even better.

delta204 on November 17, 2019, 9:55:14 AM

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delta204That was really good! Also, the alternative ending is neat — fundamentally similar plot but feels very different in tone.

itthatbetrays2 on November 8, 2019, 7:13:30 PM

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itthatbetrays2I always enjoy your stories. I'm still thorn on my favorite level of sapience for monsters in erohorror. Too mindlss and it lacks the thirst for submission/degradation, too human-like and it loses that bestial edge, but having a talking spider once in a while is good. I was expecting the spider to play on making her crave the breeding so much that she willingly removed the ribbon, but I guess this is way less complicated. I think I'm enjoying erohorror as a genre a lot, thanks for letting me give a name to it. I hope I'll be able to show you something of the same quality sooner or later!

Somnium on November 8, 2019, 11:04:03 PM

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SomniumHey, thank you so much, I'm really happy to know that you're enjoying my writing! I don't usually do variations of my stories, but you're actually not the first person to request a willing submission, so... here you go!

On another note, if you ever want to discuss writing and such, here you can find an invite to my Discord server ->   I'm always happy to bounce ideas around, especially for erohorror ;)

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