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Alolan Bad-End: Perfection

"Perfection is an abstract concept. An impossible objective. Someone once said: perfection is not attainable, but if we chase perfection we can catch excellence. This person likely never met, and would never meet Director Lusamine. Because Director Lusamine wanted nothing less than perfection."


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Chapter 1 - Perfection
Submitted: March 11, 2017 • Updated: March 12, 2017
Word count: 3453 • Size: 20k • Comments: 0 • views: 20862

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Terefere on April 3, 2019, 6:57:12 AM

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TerefereElectric socket is horizontal. Just saying, perfection is something quite subjective. A fetish?

TheKite on April 3, 2019, 9:47:19 AM

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TheKite

Sith2886 on March 12, 2017, 6:58:39 AM

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Sith2886What a great read, and the pic to go with it was great. More please?

petInali on March 12, 2017, 1:10:37 AM

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petInaliThe eyes.... oh dear goddess the depth of Dominance and submission you told with just single lines with those eyes caught my breath every time. Especially how you used it punctuating the story leading up to how her eyes got that way, and foreshadowing my favorite line.

"She would not be broken. She would be a slave out of her own will."

I can not express how much this line means to me. How much I love it. How rare it has been in my life to find someone who even remotely understands it, so to see it put into words, and the difference it means expressed in the story... your amazing talent made you one of my favorite artists. The subject matter you loved to draw put you on top of that list. The way you see D/s in your stories has cemented you as my favorite artists of all time for the rest of my life. (Your incredible talent and inventiveness for the full BDSM (amazing design talent in 'B') was already on full display in your art, so no bonus points for you from the stories despite how insanely hot they get) And now after your foray into literary storytelling you are one of my favorite authors. Which is a little unfair to other authors because you already won as an artist.



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