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Ending At Beginnings: A Patreon CYOA

Your friendly neighborhood Spider-Man has been split into two halves. The powerless Peter Parker has gotten back together with his old flame Mary Jane Watson. Meanwhile, the unfettered superhero 'Spider' has seduced the Black Cat back to his side--and this time, he intends to be the dominant master she's always needed. 

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 0 - Prologue
Submitted: January 10, 2020 • Updated: January 10, 2020
Word count: 1676 • Size: 8k • Comments: 15 • views: 971

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1
Submitted: January 10, 2020 • Updated: January 10, 2020
Word count: 2469 • Size: 12k • Comments: 0 • views: 956

Chapter 2 - Chapter 2
Submitted: January 10, 2020 • Updated: January 10, 2020
Word count: 2124 • Size: 10k • Comments: 0 • views: 859

Chapter 3 - Chapter 3
Submitted: January 11, 2020 • Updated: January 11, 2020
Word count: 1505 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 782

Chapter 4 - "Bend over."
Submitted: January 14, 2020 • Updated: January 14, 2020
Word count: 1754 • Size: 9k • Comments: 0 • views: 750

Chapter 5 - Get the Symbiote
Submitted: January 18, 2020 • Updated: January 18, 2020
Word count: 2793 • Size: 14k • Comments: 0 • views: 451

Chapter 6 - Talk To Tony
Submitted: January 23, 2020 • Updated: January 23, 2020
Word count: 2231 • Size: 12k • Comments: 0 • views: 287

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Warfy on January 23, 2020, 9:49:29 PM

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WarfyCouldn't have been happier to be wrong xD
The sit-down with Tony was exactly what I wanted, there is history here that modern comics like to avoid. Guess I panicked over nothing and you have a plan beyond a simple twist. Plus teasing is an art worth continuing.

Warfy on January 19, 2020, 12:00:16 AM

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WarfyNow that was the cutest MJ/Gwen moment in a loong, long, while. Which brings me to something I was afraid of, it feels like you are rushing things. Obviously there are certain obligations in your line of work, but there wasn't that much breathing time between the events here.
One of the best parts about reading your works is seen a genre-savvy individual writing people, instead of caricatures. Isn't this the third time Peter loses his powers, while someone else becomes Spider-man? Shouldn't MJ have some idea as to how things will line-up by now and that it's safer to move away from criminally active city, where her bf is less guilt-ridden all the time? Obviously I may just be putting that foot deeper in my mouth and this is part of the plot, where she finally smacks some sense into him. Same with Black Cat, she did just receive a lot of hidden memories back. Will that go anywhere or are they back to how things were completely?
Wasn't Iron Man Jr the most hated part about the movies, where even someone who is tired of all the recent Venom exposure would still go for the black goo? Which is also where things get tricky. In the comics Spider-man persona had no "Great power, great responsibility" weighting him down, so shouldn't something similar have happened to regular Peter (instead of just losing his powers). How much does either of them remember, shouldn't some of that be also split in certain parts? So instead of Symbiot or Tony (where it's pretty clear who will win)... how about Symbiot or mysterious Dr. Elliot Tolliver >,>

Warfy on January 19, 2020, 12:05:02 AM

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WarfyNot to say talking to a hologram Tony wouldn't be exiting, it just might have worked better if he had already talked to both of them and then was presented with the choice.

Warfy on January 16, 2020, 3:49:12 PM

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WarfyAnother great addition.
Wouldn't adding a symbiot defeat the purpose of this premise? Why not let him use his mind for a while and leave the brawn to the super persona. Have you reached the part where he interacts with lower level villains and trying to help them as Peter Parker?

TheZev on January 16, 2020, 8:45:25 PM

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TheZevI have a bit of plot twist in mind. I have this pitched as a semi-realistic take on canon, so Peter isn't willy-nilly going to throw the symbiote on or have himself a harem. And for those of you keeping tracks, we're two dollars in pledges away from the next update.

Warfy on January 17, 2020, 8:04:48 PM

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WarfyVery good to hear. It is more interesting to see development in the main relationships first and writers do often forget that Peter isn't just a pretty face.

NikkiAddams on January 13, 2020, 11:04:22 PM

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NikkiAddamsGood story!

Betrix5068 on January 12, 2020, 2:09:42 AM

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brolee on January 12, 2020, 12:38:13 AM

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DocXIII on January 11, 2020, 9:16:49 AM

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DocXIIIB!

Warfy on January 11, 2020, 7:52:29 AM

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WarfyKinkier than I expected, but fun none the less.
Seen as the Parker personalities are slightly different, him saying sorry or I love you sounds almost out of character. Maybe if it was sarcastic, cheeky or offhanded remark to get what he wants next. Especially if you want to make both of them distinct from each other. While not a jerk or a bully, how about someone more alpha, if that makes sense.

Warfy on January 11, 2020, 7:43:07 AM

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Warfy
Is kissing on the lips forbidden or did I miss something, seems like they do almost everything else.

Warfy on January 11, 2020, 5:55:41 AM

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WarfyNow I am afraid to jinx it, but things are looking good.
Seen as Spidy part is handled, have you considered following MJ on her career path? She is filming a movie in the comics right now, so it could be a new angle for the couple. Fly somewhere else for her job and Peter becoming her sort of manager? Could be an interesting new dynamic with him as the "normal" in this relationship.

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