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Free Cities Future Society Tour

Based on the game Free Cities, and Pregmod. A selection of very short stories that take the perspective of "you" the Owner of an Arcology taking a short walk through their streets and into the heart of their particular Future Society. As the story is mostly incomplete I am VERY interested in suggestions. I do not have all of these fetishes so any insight anyone has to existing or future chapters as to what could better appeal to you would be appreciated greatly by me. 

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 0 - Rome
Submitted: March 10, 2018 • Updated: April 3, 2018
Word count: 1290 • Size: 7k • Comments: 24 • views: 1602

Chapter 1 - Japan
Submitted: March 10, 2018 • Updated: April 3, 2018
Word count: 1786 • Size: 9k • Comments: 0 • views: 1094

Chapter 2 - Aztec
Submitted: March 10, 2018 • Updated: April 3, 2018
Word count: 825 • Size: 4k • Comments: 0 • views: 876

Chapter 4 - Arabian
Submitted: March 10, 2018 • Updated: September 1, 2018
Word count: 4523 • Size: 24k • Comments: 0 • views: 842

Chapter 5 - Eugenics (New content added)
Submitted: March 11, 2018 • Updated: April 1, 2018
Word count: 1622 • Size: 8k • Comments: 0 • views: 991

Chapter 7 - Gender Fundamentalism
Submitted: April 1, 2018 • Updated: April 3, 2018
Word count: 905 • Size: 4k • Comments: 0 • views: 1021

Chapter 8 - Pastoralism (Part 1)
Submitted: April 1, 2018 • Updated: April 1, 2018
Word count: 2197 • Size: 11k • Comments: 0 • views: 960

Chapter 9 - Pastoralism (Part 2)
Submitted: April 1, 2018 • Updated: April 17, 2018
Word count: 3380 • Size: 18k • Comments: 0 • views: 773

Chapter 10 - Surgical Transformationism
Submitted: April 28, 2018 • Updated: September 1, 2018
Word count: 956 • Size: 5k • Comments: 0 • views: 793

Chapter 11 - Chattel Religion (Part 1)
Submitted: April 28, 2018 • Updated: July 11, 2018
Word count: 3431 • Size: 17k • Comments: 0 • views: 1048

Chapter 12 - Chattel Religion (Part 2)
Submitted: June 3, 2018 • Updated: June 3, 2018
Word count: 3340 • Size: 17k • Comments: 0 • views: 907

Chapter 13 - Misc Events
Submitted: July 13, 2018 • Updated: July 13, 2018
Word count: 105 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 1095

Chapter 14 - Chattel Religion (Part 3)
Submitted: August 5, 2018 • Updated: August 5, 2018
Word count: 2755 • Size: 14k • Comments: 0 • views: 668

Chapter 15 - Hedonism (Prelude)
Submitted: September 1, 2018 • Updated: September 1, 2018
Word count: 1878 • Size: 10k • Comments: 0 • views: 932

Chapter 16 - Hedonism (Part 1) A Tour.
Submitted: September 1, 2018 • Updated: September 1, 2018
Word count: 3378 • Size: 18k • Comments: 0 • views: 717

Chapter 17 - Hedonism (Part 2) Sex, Drugs, and Slobs
Submitted: September 1, 2018 • Updated: September 7, 2018
Word count: 4342 • Size: 22k • Comments: 0 • views: 909

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SpectralTime on August 5, 2018, 9:41:25 AM

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SpectralTime...Man, that Chattel Religion thing in the last one really got me.  Bleh.  Still shivering. 

Maybe it's just that I'm a softie who mostly avoids the nastier options in this game, but... brrrr.

I mean, it's good writing.  You do a good job of getting us to like the MC, framing the religion as a hard-luck story very expertly, and then bam, the twist hits, the mask is pulled off, and we see the lie and the hypocrisy underneath.  

WaxerRed on August 5, 2018, 7:20:11 PM

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WaxerRedThanks, I am glad I was able to have an emotional effect on someone, even if that emotion wasn't the most pleasant...

DevilsOrigin on June 3, 2018, 8:25:54 PM

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DevilsOriginYou need to go more into this Custom made slave machine thing, it sounds insane. 

WaxerRed on June 3, 2018, 8:51:12 PM

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WaxerRedThanks it was a lot of fun to write, but coming up with so many roles did get a bit challenging at one point. I'm not sure if I'll be able to add another instance of it in later chapters though, as it had a pretty specific use in Arabian and I'd hate to just rehash it.   Who knows maybe someone will add it as an option to actual Free Cities game.....one day. 

DevilsOrigin on June 3, 2018, 9:13:34 PM

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DevilsOriginI would be curious too see a slaves perception of their master after meeting them for the first time, Similar to what you did with veronica in the chattel religion chapter. 

WaxerRed on June 3, 2018, 10:06:35 PM

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WaxerRed  That sounds like both an interesting way to put a chapter in a new perspective and add some challenge to it. (in a good way) I did plan for the third chapter of Chattel Religion to pick up yet another girl for "The Lord"'s Harem, maybe putting it from the perspective of the outside looking in will make it that much better. The most challenging part would be I'd have to somehow avoid describing the face in detail as "The Lord" is intentionally left vague in appearance and even gender to be immersive for the reader. 
And not forgetting your original suggestion with the custom slave machine! I've been trying to think up of how to write even a small sub-chapter that could take the view point of a slave after waking and seeing their new owner walk in, but that seems even harder. As the tube-grown slave was more or less mentally 'born' at the instant the owner walks in, 'albeit with a faked mental backstory' it'd be hard describe them as a character as to their moment they've only been 'alive' for a few seconds...if that makes sense. 
If you are looking for more content close to "Harim Allah" then I highly recommend searching for 'sex arcade' on this website. I'd be lying if I didn't take some major inspiration from there. 
And as always thanks for the feedback, it helps me plot the way in where I should move the story forward and grease the wheels stopped by procrastination. Is there anything particular you want to see or a FS you want written sooner? Or should more be added to the existing ones?

DevilsOrigin on June 4, 2018, 5:51:45 AM

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DevilsOriginYeah I know what you mean, You dont have to write more about it if its too difficult. I'm moreso curious about how a slave whose is given false memories would percieve the world. For example if they are implanted with a ridiculous or unrealistic backstory, would an intelligent slave eventually realize its fake or would they be subconciously forced to believe it no matter how ridiculous or silly it is? What if there master tells them the truth? How would they accept it? would they possibly have a 'my entire life is a lie' moment and breakdown? Also, Can I ask what exactly a Purse Puppy boy is? Google isnt telling me much. 
As for More FS, Im really liking the Chattel religion one and wanna see more of that one. Altough a Degradtionalist one sounds intertesting. Your doing a great job btw.

WaxerRed on June 4, 2018, 6:42:46 PM

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WaxerRedPerhaps I should add a new section detailing a 'second stage' to the buying process. After the 'honeymoon' period where the buyer gets the first hand experience with the slave they've made (and presumably fucked their brains out) and spent some time talking to them. The buyer then leaves to speak with the technical crew for some last minute 'hardware and software' changes. 
Hardware could be adding or subtracting a few years of age, changing up the voice and accent to be more pleasing, Bigger smaller assets, haircut, ect. 
Software could be more interesting, make them a bit more lustful, a tad smarter or stupider, add a fetish or two. Tweak the backstory just a bit so they can better fit in the role and future use they buyer has in mind for them.  

Then maybe after that I could go into the rare cases where the slaves have to come in for a 'tune up'.  Maybe they've developed unforeseen bugs or the more fantasy centered girls get script errors when put in a new environment. Or maybe a full system restart option could be added in vocal command where the slave reverts back to the second they meet their owner again. 
Additional content could be perhaps someone likes the body but is tired of the personality, a buyer might think the body is rocking but the 'Lofty Queen' persona got old fast and wants it replaced with a 'cum guzzler' version.  Or vice versa, Someone might like the personality they've helped create but want their slave with a all new fresh body to explore. (I've seen a lot of desire for body swap content to be added over at hgg so it is a definite consideration.) 
The purse puppy boy is to reference the "adorable" little white dogs stereotypical rich girls hold in the purse just to show off. Not a real dog, just practically a living stuffed animal that exists for the owner to have something stupid to cuddle with when they are bored.  I tried to imagine a 5 foot tall 85 pound little sub boy to fit the role. 
Thanks for the compliments of Chattel religion, I'm going to be sorry when I reach the end point for it. I tried to make the central "theme" to be about absolute devotion through faith, though I might have been glancing a bit to far in the degradational territory with the human urinal in chapter one...though it's nothing compared to whats coming later.

DevilsOrigin on June 4, 2018, 10:05:42 AM

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DevilsOriginalso, cant you also have it so another person is buying a slave from the smart elevator and the reader is observing the transaction as the arcology owner? Then you can give the Buyer a personality of sorts aswell. 

nahte on June 3, 2018, 7:04:55 AM

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nahteGood game, and nice story.

WaxerRed on June 3, 2018, 8:51:56 PM

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WaxerRedThank you, glad you enjoyed it!

WaxerRed on June 3, 2018, 4:42:21 AM

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WaxerRedI'd like to say one of the standard, "College classes" "I'm Sick" or "Computer Failure" as reason for no new updates....truth is I was just Lazy. Sorry :(

Archival117 on April 2, 2018, 4:09:55 AM

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Archival117     I just want to say, that this is the Story that made me finally decide to get an account on this site, just so that I could Upvote and Comment on it.

     I'm loving these so far. They are quite original and imaginative in their execution, and they give me a new way of thinking about the game.
     My favorite chapters so far are Japan, Gender Fundamentalism, and of course, Pastoralism. Aztec was quite well written too.

My only critque so far is that you have quite a few spelling and grammar errors, so just be a bit more mindful of that in your future chapters.

I'll be commenting on your chapters individually over time, but for now, I just wanted to say:
Thank You for this awesome writing and keep up the good work!

Archival117 on April 2, 2018, 2:22:05 PM

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Archival117     I felt that Chapter 1: Japan was a fantastic chapter. As I've noted, one of my favorites. I now want to take Edo Revivalism for a spin in the game after reading this.
     I love the descriptions and the 'experience' you've presented here. The Future Society you've rendered here feels real to me, and I badly want to visit it. You've made both the retro and modern halves of the Japanese culture really appealing with this imaginative Free Cities twist of yours.

     That being said, there were some spelling and grammar flaws, and a few minor imperfections 
(like saying 'Swords' instead of 'Katanas' when describing the Samurai).
     To help you address is I've taken the liberty to do a little revision of the text to smooth things out and make it all read better.
You can find it here:     />
I hope you like it. Feel free to use it anyway you wish. I just want to help and maybe save you some time.

And before I forget, I also read and greatly enjoyed your previous chapter on the "New Rome". I run Roman Revivalism sometimes and I think you've aptly captured the pompous, and triumphant attitude of such a society.

Still, there were also a few errors in that text as well, so I made a Revision for that chapter too.
You can find it here:     />

I hope you don't mind these revisions, and I hope they help.

See you next chapter, bro.

WaxerRed on April 2, 2018, 2:47:04 PM

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WaxerRedThank I'm glad you liked them, I'm honestly surprised how well those two chapters came out. I thought they might be boring to write but they were actually a lot of fun finding ways to incorporate the culture's ancient slavery with a more modern twist. For example I didn't make up the term of calling slaves "Living Mouths" that was the real termed refereed to Japanese slaves once upon a time. 
And I definitely will look into the updates you've posted some time during the night and update the chapters accordingly, I most certainly do not mind and what you're doing to help is Fantastic. 

WaxerRed on April 2, 2018, 2:28:12 PM

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WaxerRedWow thank you it means a lot to me that someone likes my story, so I'll be sure to keep it up as best I can. Seriously thanks again. And as for spelling and grammar errors yeah I'll be sure to give them another look. But for as bad as they are now, they are no were close to how bad they are in the first draft. You think by now I'd have learned to spell archolgy argoly Arcoplogo Arcolge  Arcology.

Braidborn on March 11, 2018, 11:36:00 AM

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BraidbornMy two suggestions would be Pastoralism and Repopulationism,  for Pastoralism a trip to a massive industrial dairy (the kind you can sell slaves to, not necessarily the one in game)    And for Repopulationism perhaps a clinic that specializes specifically in the creation of Broodmothers,  

In regards to the question about genders, specifically males, in my opinion there is a certain point in the feminization process where guys can no longer be called guys,  to me a trap is a girl, for the simple reason that i realistically wouldn't know unless they either mentioned it or i took them to bed,   in the example of asset expansionism. if you add the feminine bits then that would remove the concept of a true masculine male, turning them into shemales (not pc i know,  generally i refer to a Character (not irl) with a dick and feminine appearance incl breasts but no vagina, a futa/herm as having all of it) personally in my game i generally turn them all into futanari, but i digress  
 As for Gender radicalism, i think the big thing about that particular society is Mpreg, however i do realize that most people don't touch that with a 20 foot stick so i would understand a lack of it

WaxerRed on March 13, 2018, 12:34:03 PM

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WaxerRedThanks you, and we're on a pretty similar page for Pastoralism but with a tiny comedic twist on where all that milk ends up. And for Repopulatinasim I'll need to think more about that and will probably do that one near the end.

For asset expansionism I was more asking about the  citizens not the slaves. Should the male and female (and herm) citizens also partake in some asset expansion, should they refrain and only appreciate what they add to their slaves, or should they make themselves to big to move and require the assistance of their slaves? I'll probably add all three but should one be the main focus?
I'm glad you mentioned Mpreg, since it's not really my fetish I hadn't even thought about it. But I have nothing against it and will definitely include it. 

Braidborn on March 15, 2018, 3:39:24 PM

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BraidbornAh, in that case i would think they would choose the huge but functional option (RA style)  I mean realistically if they were immobile due to their assets unless the slaves were also immobile wouldn't they just run away?  perhaps the most wealthy becoming truly immobile being able to afford that kind of slave assistance and hunters to recapture those who can move (the ones who assist, considering an immobile slave being unable to do much in the way of moving anyone else)  And in regards to specific part, i would think those who have everything huge would be rarer than certain ones, if they are a guy, i would assume getting huge breasts would be uncommon, likewise with lips and butt, with their focus entirely on their dick and balls,  assuming they intend to use that particular part,  i would think a femboy or bottom would be more interested in the feminine assets,  
In regards to repop, its my favorite society by far, in addition to pastoralism (hence my mentioning them specifically)  Also there is "supposedly" another FS, Cummunism (Pastoralism being more milk focused)  It is mentioned in the coding but i have no idea if it is available, or how to access it (one of the npc arcologies was focused on it, so i started reading the code out of curiosity)

WaxerRed on March 17, 2018, 8:50:43 AM

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WaxerRedOne of the people in the 8chan thread mentioned Cummunism, it was originally planned to be the FS that opposed Pastoralism. Makes sense pastloralism being milk focused and cummunism being cum focused. But fans being fans hated it before it was even fully added and the creator moved onto other ideas. 

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