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The Giver

Biochemist, Dr Alisa Cox, finds herself living a dream and a nightmare.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - The Gift
Submitted: September 1, 2009 • Updated: September 1, 2009
Word count: 3956 • Size: 20k • Comments: 4 • views: 5006

Chapter 2 - Our Offspring
Submitted: September 2, 2009 • Updated: September 2, 2009
Word count: 2791 • Size: 14k • Comments: 7 • views: 2639

Chapter 3 - Growing Pains
Submitted: September 2, 2009 • Updated: September 2, 2009
Word count: 1736 • Size: 9k • Comments: 0 • views: 2128

Chapter 4 - Giver's Bliss
Submitted: September 5, 2009 • Updated: September 5, 2009
Word count: 1680 • Size: 8k • Comments: 2 • views: 2250

Comments

Comments (23)

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redpandie on September 12, 2009, 5:00:19 AM

redpandie on (Chapter: 4)
redpandie......

good ending but personally death after all that is not that great.....

but its great read and i hope you make many more

mercyfyre on October 12, 2009, 10:30:56 AM

mercyfyre on (Chapter: 4)
mercyfyreI don't really think they died, per say, but just became one with the giver

KiraShiki on January 1, 2014, 9:16:57 PM

KiraShiki on (Chapter: index)
KiraShikiIn a word, assimilated.

prinny555 on November 23, 2010, 10:40:12 AM

prinny555 on (Chapter: index)
prinny555Hehee. Cox. I See what u did thar.

rutteger1 on October 10, 2009, 11:18:37 AM

rutteger1 on (Chapter: 1)
rutteger1A masterpiece of pornographic pleasure, 5 stars!

IamFoxClan on September 10, 2009, 9:33:47 AM

IamFoxClan on (Chapter: index)
IamFoxClanIt's like Greek mythology

bobbydando on September 6, 2009, 9:47:48 PM

bobbydando on (Chapter: index)
bobbydandoawesome story, you did a great job. strangely HF notification system didn't told me when you uploaded the new chapters :/ anyway, love the ending, hard to say if it's a good one or a bad one, It depend on each and everyone's perception of the whole thing. You eroticwriter44, did you wrote it thinking of it like a good ending, or a bad ending?

eroticwriter44 on September 7, 2009, 4:37:16 AM

eroticwriter44 on (Chapter: index)
eroticwriter44I believe Dr. Cox and Jill experienced the best ending in respect to their stange situation. I don't always believe in happy endings, just the happiest endings under the curcumstances.

keric22 on September 5, 2009, 11:41:45 AM

keric22 on (Chapter: index)
keric22This was truly a story, worth reading. ;_; Such a happy ending. Awkward as they were dissolved, but yes, happy. I don't know how this story could be any weirder, but happier in a way.

Sheather on September 2, 2009, 1:57:36 PM

Sheather on (Chapter: 2)
SheatherExcellent story mate.
Really quite good as far as reading goes.

redpandie on September 2, 2009, 2:05:09 AM

redpandie on (Chapter: 2)
redpandiehey bobby if your gonna read these things then start working again on the tentecle doungion series. if your gonna just draw stuff then at least draw a ending for it.

damn.

eroticwriter44 on September 2, 2009, 6:49:46 AM

eroticwriter44 on (Chapter: 2)
eroticwriter44Dude, you can't rush art. Just like writing, the inspiration can't be dictated.

keric22 on September 2, 2009, 5:02:10 AM

keric22 on (Chapter: 2)
keric22Who are you to say what he must work on or not? Get a check-up on "ALL" please. On topic, Very very nice story.

eroticwriter44 on September 2, 2009, 8:27:18 AM

eroticwriter44 on (Chapter: index)
eroticwriter44Glad you liked it, I'm about to start chapter three.

keric22 on September 2, 2009, 8:29:04 AM

keric22 on (Chapter: index)
keric22;o Chapter three?! But the story says complete.... ._. HF is lieing to us. The system is corrupt! Bwahahaha! >D We need moar chapters! Lol.

eroticwriter44 on September 3, 2009, 9:57:58 AM

eroticwriter44 on (Chapter: index)
eroticwriter44Hope you like three. One more chapter to go. I'm ending it at four.

keric22 on September 3, 2009, 10:41:45 AM

keric22 on (Chapter: index)
keric22Holy lord. I can only say one possible thing to this story. And to you.


I fucking LOVE IT! And you. ;o We must collab or something later on! <33333

bobbydando on September 1, 2009, 10:29:29 PM

bobbydando on (Chapter: 2)
bobbydandoohoh, what a mother wouldn't do for her child :P

kcaj289 on October 7, 2011, 5:58:16 PM

kcaj289 on (Chapter: 2)
kcaj289Comment by redpandie on 09:05 AM, September 2nd, 2009



hey bobby if your gonna read these things then start working again on the tentecle doungion series. if your gonna just draw stuff then at least draw a ending for it.

eroticwriter44 on September 2, 2009, 8:30:04 AM

eroticwriter44 on (Chapter: 2)
eroticwriter44I can't express how thrilled I am that someone as talented as you likes my writing. It gives me the confidence I needed to commit more time to writing. It's becoming my favorite hobby.

bobbydando on September 1, 2009, 7:39:47 AM

bobbydando on (Chapter: 1)
bobbydandoA really good story!

eroticwriter44 on September 1, 2009, 9:30:29 AM

eroticwriter44 on (Chapter: 1)
eroticwriter44Thanks:)

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