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Fuck Shit, Get Fit: A Wii Fit Trainer fanfiction.

Wii Fit Trainer vigorously masturbates on the Demo selection for the new SSB. To save game memory, her lines were simply ripped from the commercial she did, but they're somewhat... corrupted. Written to jump on the huge bandwagon that is Trainer 34!

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Chapter 1 - Fuck shit, get fit!
Submitted: July 23, 2013 • Updated: February 27, 2014
Word count: 1522 • Size: 8k • Comments: 0 • views: 10281

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Rexic137 on January 10, 2015, 2:22:41 AM

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Rexic137very nice. do you take story requests by any chance?

Lemmibl on December 1, 2014, 11:13:58 AM

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Lemmibl
She rubbed her cockhead until her hand was shining with HD particle effects.

I fucking lost it. :)

Arousal and entertainment in one! Can't complain. 5/5.

 

witch-hunting on September 4, 2014, 3:47:11 AM

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witch-huntingVery hot! Love the Trainer!

Also, when you wrote the line: "She laid down, twisting her body so that her whole ass and the side of her breast was facing the camera at the same time", did you use this picture as reference? />

zedlav on September 19, 2014, 3:59:56 AM

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zedlavAh, no, but good catch! That is definitely the pose I was thinking of.

Tyrannex on February 21, 2014, 9:44:25 AM

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TyrannexThis can only be the work of famed erotic writer Professor zedlaV! BTW, how are you?

zedlav on February 21, 2014, 5:56:18 PM

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zedlavI am A-OK and moving forward, good buddy!

Dekumonz on January 29, 2014, 7:41:44 AM

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DekumonzWow, this story was... This was a story, indeed.
Okay so first off, I'm gonna give you points right off the bat for using the word "jism" which never fails to bring a smile to my face.
Secondly, I'll give you bonus points for using one of my favorite verbs, "whacking" when her huge meat whacked her thigh.
And god damn nothing screams sexy louder than some good ol' fashion HD particle effects!
All in all, this was fun as hell to read!  Tenouttaten, would read again.
 

zedlav on January 29, 2014, 11:45:55 PM

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zedlavPersonally I think this was a little weak. Solo scenes are always twice as hard to write because you only have material for half of the usual number, and they rarely change positions. It's really difficult to make "She jerked her hand up and down vigorously" last for 1500 words. If other authors tell you they can, they are lying. However, with this in mind even before I began, I was able to lengthen it in other directions like making it actually fun to read. Glad you enjoied, Deku.

Dekumonz on January 31, 2014, 5:13:29 AM

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DekumonzWell from my perspective, you seemed to make a lot happen with just one person. Or, as you said,  you made it fun to read with your vocabulary and descriptiveness which I think is more important than simply having lots of material. Or at least equally important.
But like I said, the material didn't seem lacking anyway. Ya did good, kid. ;)

zedlav on January 31, 2014, 10:26:42 PM

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zedlavYou hit bang-on the reason it takes a long time, even to only produce 1500 words- To really rustle through your mind's thesaurus and come up with new and alternate ways to say things that don't sound like retarded babbling. There are a lot of ways to make this story longer that don't sound like real english sentences, though they may be. I'm happy you liked it!

KatrinaMishow on July 23, 2013, 10:30:16 PM

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KatrinaMishow:: Sneaks up... suckles on the Trainer for a few moments.. since.. yaknow, it has to get cleaned out somehow!::  Wheeee~


​.. One odd question.. Why is it tagged for Super Smash Bros.?  >.>

zedlav on July 23, 2013, 11:38:53 PM

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zedlavThat pool of cum in her tits was one of the best ideas I ever had.

zedlav on July 24, 2013, 1:51:43 AM

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zedlavAlso it's tagged SMB because of this.



This is the reason Wii Fit Trainer has been getting all kinds of rule 34 about her lately.

KatrinaMishow on July 26, 2013, 5:00:06 PM

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KatrinaMishowOoooh..  I figured it'd go better in .. whatever.. it is.. she's actually from.  But that makes sense now.  

Goomba on July 23, 2013, 8:42:37 AM

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zedlav on July 23, 2013, 11:41:24 PM

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zedlavI think I had my fun with Trainer, I don't know if the appeal of her 34 is her unique color or the fact that it's not obvious that she would have 34 about her and it's hot in that taboo way. Either way I think the appeal is visual rather than written, this was simply a way to give anybody looking for a textual perversion of her somewhere to come to long into the future.

Goomba on July 24, 2013, 7:18:44 AM

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KatrinaMishow on July 26, 2013, 4:59:34 PM

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KatrinaMishowYeah.. Well.  If it exists, there's porn of it, obviously.  I think the fact that she's supposedly an attractive fitness trainer type that does it for some peoples~  As Goom said.

Online porn video at mobile phone


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